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May 20, 2008

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Farewell in July (May 20, 2008 11:32 pm)

Hi my friends
I'm going to Tian Jin(a big city in China) for my Senior High 3,there's a better school and by that time,i can have no time to be here,talking with you
So here i put a farewell
and i hope the cyworld won't delect me because i will have a long time off
well
wait for me in 2009!
i will miss you all my friends
especially my dear sister Marymel

thanks every friends
thanks for your support to me!
Current Mood: moodWired
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Apr 22, 2008

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<font face="verdana,... (Apr 22, 2008 5:26 am)

quick read
A man was killed--son of a rich business family,,police arrested a tea girl called Sandy,she admitted that she did this with a silver tea pot.
But a policer Dine don't believe this and want to find out the truth,her best friend Andi was bought over by a secret couple to hide the truth and was finally killed,but before her death she sent a letter to Dine and told her all she knew,so Dine went to the court with these evidences on the day Sandy was judges and.......

thank you if you can help me dear friend.
Current Mood: moodHopeful
madeleen
madeleen
May 10, 2008 5:45 am

It's so good, you should continue!

Michael
Michael
Apr 23, 2008 11:06 pm

I have a few ideas. More questions than answers right now =) Let me organize them and I'll type them up for you =)

marymel
marymel
Apr 23, 2008 4:47 am

Okay dear.... I'm gonna read the whole novel again but I couldn't read it well because it's so bright.... Hope you will understand dear^^ Wo ai ni^^

Apr 17, 2008

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.. (Apr 17, 2008 10:09 pm)

Happy i got the first place in my exams...but sad it seems my parents don't take much care on this....

though many quarrels in my family,but i must be strong-willed...

now i fall in love with the lucky plants...like that i use as my profile...

Current Mood: moodBummed
PR
PR
Apr 19, 2008 1:57 pm

That called Parent's trap in Linsay Lorhan song:but motherless daughter is more poor condition:you are lucky as you wish:XD

Starylake
Starylake
Apr 19, 2008 10:07 am

Congratulations! my strong-Willed good fellow ^^? XD! my gf's also got lots of quarrels in her family ._.

marymel
marymel
Apr 19, 2008 5:22 am

Congratulations my dear sister^^ Just keep it up my dear^^

Mar 29, 2008

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<font color="#000000... (Mar 29, 2008 5:15 am)

  SPOT(4)
(Dine found someone who said he knew about the SPOT on MSN)
 
  -What did you know?
  -Sandy is the killer,but not the final one
  -what do you mean final?
  -Haven't you read those documents?
  -The mortal wound is caused by gun.
  -You are right.then go to find the correct answer
  -can you help me?
  After a long silence,then typed
  - i have no interest

  People said,"Happniess is always with sorrow."
  Dine knew this is true,fully.
  She was fired.
  "Jack,you don't need to feel sorry about this,thank you very much for your help."Dine was collecting her things to go home,Jack want to help but she refused.
  "But i don't feel sorry at all,it's your business,i told you don't care but you don't listen to me."
  "Hey!!Jack!!"
 
  When Dine went home,she received a private letter,but the name written on really shocked her,it read,'From:Andi Ray.'
  She felt all the world became blank,all the things became nonsence,all the things she had studied were not real.
  Andi.
  After a few minutes' silence she finally found her soul,"that must be posted before her death,i must believe sience."
  She opened and found it was really posted a week ago,before her death.
  She read that,got really a big shot.
  Refreshed,she made a call to the court.
 
  Court,
  Sandy was taken in,after some questions it seems she would be fined.
  There were a couple in the court too,smiling when they heard Sandy is guilty.
  But they could no longer smiled when Dine stood  up and showed the court that letter.
  With the documents she found,said,"We can see from this letter,Andi posted it to me because she knew she would be killed as a spy,she told me everything about this murder in her letter............."
  The sun was shining,Dine paced out,felt so good!
  So what't the answer?
                                           Keep waiting~~~~~~~
Current Mood: moodCrushed
madeleen
madeleen
May 10, 2008 5:44 am

It's so good! You must be really proud!

Julia
Julia
Apr 22, 2008 5:05 pm

THIS IS VERY HARD TO READ WITH THE LIGHT GREEN COLOR SORRY

Starylake
Starylake
Apr 12, 2008 8:50 am

It was more than nuttin except there were some syntax errors in part III. :P

espana
espana
Apr 08, 2008 5:55 am

oh?really?thank you~~~~can i know what?

Starylake
Starylake
Mar 29, 2008 5:37 am

seems to me this spot IV is better than III in some reason =P

marymel
marymel
Mar 29, 2008 5:32 am

I need to read it again from the start dear...hahaha

Mar 21, 2008

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<font size="3"... (Mar 21, 2008 8:35 pm)

SPOT(3)
"The victim was knocked on the head,by that pot,but that is not mortal,the mortal wound is on his chest,but,"Dine shouted,"Hey,Andi,but these's no information about this wound!There should be,but,but where is that?"
She looked at Andi,who were sitting there without any words by the time Dines entered the room,seemed thinking a certain thing,she tried to call her name and carefully walked near,tapped on her shoulder.
She took a near sight now,she watched her face carefully and couldn't move her eyes,Andi's eyes,didn't blink any more.
"ANDI!"

"Sir,I'm sorry,"Dine tried her best to hold her tears,sniffed,"The informations have been deleted,and Andi......"Her voice was getting more and more lower,and at last bursted out crying.
After Dine walked out of the master's office,his voice was still with her,"Andi did that,she sold us out."But she could no longer get angry,Andi had gone,forever,she found a deep sorrow in her heart,she thought she should found this earlier so it wouldn't happened,she thought a lot,but no tears in her eyes.
She walked out of the building,the sun was shining brightly,everybosy looked so happy,a group of girls passed her,laughing and talking,"The star's concert is 3 days after!I have got the ticket!So lucky!"Their smiling faces were so bright that made people feel the sky was cleaner,except Dine,"3 days,yeah,if Andi was still alive,she would be very exciting about the coming concert,she likes,oh,liked music"
When she was thing these,suddenly remembered a thing that she had almost forgot,how to say,like a stone from the space hit her.
"Sandy!"
Hurried back to the holding place,she couldn't wait to ask Sandy,"What did you mean to keep me waiting?What do you want to tell me?Tell me now,now ,now!"
Sandy looked calm,"The first thing is,DO not shouted at me!And i want to tell you is that i AM the killer!I did that,with the pot,i want you to believe but you seems never be."
But it seemed Dine could no longer hold her temper to get what she want,this anger mostly came from Andi's death and betrayal,how could she hold that?
Bursted,"Yes,you killed him,with that pot!You are a superwoman,you can kill someone with just a pot !OK,OK,i get that,there are only 2 choices,first is the pot is not silver,it's diamond!second is you are really super from the outspace to destory human beings!Such a super like you can be just hold in the prison,and to die there!"
Dine left full of anger.

"Seems our dear Miss Dine is almost crazy,haha,see is she needs some help,"the man in the car smiled,clicked his cigar,"But,I don't want waste,like our best Andi Ray."
"Indeed,"a woman's voice,sounded soft and lazy,"Miss Ray wanted to be faithful to us and her friendship at the same time,but for all we know,that could just be,a dream."

It's about 11:00 at night,nobody except the guards at the police office,the guards were sleepy,didn't realize a person get into the building through a small door on the other side which is prepared for emergency.
The night is silent

Dine opened her computer,found someone wanted to talk to her on MSN,she read,"I know everything about the SPOT murder."
Current Mood: moodMotivated
madeleen
madeleen
May 10, 2008 5:41 am

It's so good!! I think you should continue by yourself because I believe in you!! ^____^

marymel
marymel
Mar 25, 2008 6:48 am

Wow! What a long novel dear!!!! Bravo!!!

PR
PR
Mar 21, 2008 11:07 pm

What are you talking if I have only one minute for entire my life in your Journal room?Nonsense?

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