hi, i am kesha, nice to meet you all
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Jun 19, 2008

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the country (Jun 19, 2008 12:55 pm)

with the dawn of day the day is new
the summer sky so vast and blue

this life brings things so great
so much to appreciate

listen to the soft breeze blow
this is the country, i love it so

in the west the sun will set
good times and memories, i'll never forget.

by: kesha j.
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KuroKatana
KuroKatana
Jul 22, 2008 12:45 pm

Nice start, just remeber commas at the end of each line! Which one was published?

fonda
fonda
Jun 30, 2008 8:21 am

it is great i love it

Michael
Michael
Jun 26, 2008 9:43 pm

Hey! Thanx for sharing =D many people wouldn't share thier first work.

urworstnightmare
urworstnightmare
Jun 19, 2008 12:56 pm

this is the first poem i have ever written. since then, i have written about 100 and have had one published.

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